Joe

Posted on June 11, 2024 by stanj
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4 Responses to Joe

  1. rowlh says:
    June 11, 2024 at 9:41 am

    great detail and maybe add some more writing and adjectives

  2. herrw says:
    June 11, 2024 at 9:41 am

    I like the sound of your holiday but maybe check some of the spellings.

  3. robel says:
    June 11, 2024 at 9:44 am

    maybe you could of done areal pool instead of a blow up pool

  4. robel says:
    June 11, 2024 at 9:51 am

    maybe add more adjectives it isnt that cool to be honest

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