well done but to much writing.
toby i liked your blog and the trip you did miss a full stop at the end apart from that great job love reading it thanks for posting about it
maybe just more pictures
it was very funn to be honsest his team did win as well so he is not liying
wow it was a lot of work and very interesting and nice next time it would be nice if there were some ajectives please
VERY LONG.very detailed and fun to read.
more punctuation and make things a bit more specific. I enjoyed the blog
its brilliant keep up the perfect work
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well done but to much writing.
toby i liked your blog and the trip you did miss a full stop at the end apart from that great job love reading it thanks for posting about it
maybe just more pictures
it was very funn to be honsest his team did win as well so he is not liying
wow it was a lot of work and very interesting and nice
next time it would be nice if there were some ajectives please
VERY LONG.very detailed and fun to read.
more punctuation and make things a bit more specific. I enjoyed the blog
its brilliant keep up the perfect work