oliverb

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7 Responses to oliverb

  1. sheem says:

    You can add some more words but i like the story behind it. from matilda

  2. fullr says:

    I like it but you can add more words from remi

  3. jenne says:

    it seems like this could be a bit mean to Emanuel did you ask him before you post this

  4. metae says:

    You could improve by writing a bit more and a bit rude to Emanuel and you missed your punctuation.And i liked that you put the trothy.

  5. rouso says:

    good work oliver b my friend

  6. kiddl says:

    you can add more to your sentence from lily

  7. metae says:

    You could improve your writing by writing a bit more and a bit rude to Emanuel and you missed your punctuation.And i liked that you put the trothy.From Emanuel

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