I love it but maybe you could add a couple pictures.i love your backround. from matilda.
brilliant post Evie lots of interesting info however a bit hard to read as its all in capitals
I love it but you can maybe add more pictire
well done maybe use some more adjectives
I love your story so much, but maybe you could add some punctuation since you haven’t added any yet !
omg so true and is so sad to leave year 4 but be sure to add more punctuation marks and less capital letters
I LOVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
very nice Evie but it looks like you are shouting because you did it in capital from lily
fantaxit
fantakit
it made my day that story
I like it but i dont like at it is all capatil letters
thanks
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I love it but maybe you could add a couple pictures.i love your backround. from matilda.
brilliant post Evie lots of interesting info however a bit hard to read as its all in capitals
I love it but you can maybe add more pictire
well done maybe use some more adjectives
I love your story so much, but maybe you could add some punctuation since you haven’t added any yet !
omg so true and is so sad to leave year 4 but be sure to add more punctuation marks and less capital letters
I LOVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
very nice Evie but it looks like you are shouting because you did it in capital from lily
fantaxit
fantakit
it made my day that story
fantakit
I like it but i dont like at it is all capatil letters
thanks